I’m making sure my paper is organized and my points/ideas are clear. I’m working on to make sure my quotes and interview sayings work well with my points as well. I want my sentences to not be choppy and unclear. My paper needs to be more opinionated and less formal.
My revision goals are that my paper makes sense and has a good flow. Also, I want my paragraphs to make sense and have it be organized. I need to work on a better conclusion.
- Work on conclusion
- Maybe add another quote and other thoughts
- have my ideas relate back to my thesis clearly
- Grammar corrections
- Overall have a good flow throughout the essay
My biggest challenge is keep my thoughts and ideas together where they make sense. Sometimes I put down thoughts that belong somewhere else on my paper or not there at all. Also, to format the paper as a conversation with the authors and interviewee.
If this becomes difficult, I would ask a friend who could peer review my paper really well or ask my professor for help and advice about my essay.
