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Original Paragraph: I personally believe that art can help students reduce stress, along with other mental health issues. I read an article that was called, “To excel or not to excel: Strong evidence on the adverse effect of smartphone addiction on academic performance” by Nazir S. Hawi and Maya Samaha. They talked about how students …
The chapter I chose from They Say/I say is “Distinguishing What You Say from What They Say” (Chapter 5). This chapter grabbed my attention because in my essay, I need to add my voice in the conversation with the other authors that we talked about. It talks about where to put your own voice where …
Introduction starting broad, but getting more specific as to what I’m talking about, strong thesis Use quotes and supporting evidence, relating back to thesis Develop a Naysayer, Barclay, or TREAC paragraph in my essay Keep my ideas all together, not scattered around my paper and have smooth transitions Good conclusion wrapping up everything I stated …
